Evaluation Q4

Question four – How successful was the script and nine key frames in achieving its aims?

The aim of the script was to show a disruption of the sequel of One Day. I did this pretty well, by using the same female characters name in the original film, Jasmine; this helped show the narrative connections between the two films. I also made this character act in a similar way that her father’s friend did from the original film as this is what she is meant to be able to do. I also included the drinking habits that Jasmine’s father has in One Day for her partner to have too.

I showed the disruption in the script being them revealing true feelings out, though Jasmine doesn’t want the feelings to be out in the air as she isn’t sure about the situation as he reminds her of her Father too much. This is an awkward scene in the film and through the script, I successfully showed this awkwardness well.

The aim of the nine key frames was to visually pick out important parts of the script and show what the film would look like. I did this successfully as I picked out parts that I found significant visually within the script and photographed these key moments in the shots that would have been used for this kind of film.

The lighting that I used helped me successfully show what the film would visually look like as it was soft and really represented the film well.

Evaluation Q3

Question three – How was the location report used in the construction of the nine key frames?

By completing a location report I knew how I wanted my shots in my nine key frames to look with the use of the location. It helped me learn what I wanted to add as props into the shots to make the frames look as I had pictured them in my head.

From my location report, I found out what type of table I wanted to use with regard to the size. I then had decided that I wanted to add a white delicate table cloth onto the table to make the scene look like how I had imagined it.

Evaluation Q1

Question one – What were the aims (purpose) of the script and nine key frames?

The script that I chose to make was a disruption scene for a sequel of the film ‘One Day’, 2011. I was exploring the way that gender is represented within romantic comedies. In my textual analysis I had explored the way in which this genre of film had represented both male and female characters, I learned that females usually have a journey within the film in which they are represented differently throughout, whereas the male character is usually quite soft and romantic. From learning this, I followed the same way for my script and nine key frames.

The aim with my nine key frames was to select key moments within my script that was visually shown how it would construct the gender representation. I had to think about many different aspects, including the location. In my script I wanted to set the scene in a restaurant as I felt this was a good place to set up a character interaction and to have the characters have a full conversation about their feelings with one another but it was also a location in which there could be distractions to interrupt the awkwardness that the female character felt. I wanted a location with low lighting so that the audience would focus on the characters and that also the scene would feel romantic. This idea that the scene was romantic also gave some background on the male character as he set up this occasion so we see that he wants this. If I was to improve the location now, I would show other people within the restaurant in my shots, to make the restaurant look busier and increase the sound appearance.

I also had to focus on the costume, I chose for the female character to be wearing a white dress to represent purity and innocence but I also dressed her up as this showed her true feelings that she was claiming that she didn’t want the situation although she clearly did through the effort  she made. Within the script, her white dress was important as she spills red wine over it. The male characters costume was also important as it showed what this situation meant to him and showed his feminity of carefully choosing his clothes which is a modern stereotype.

The props was also an important aspect, the wine bottle and glasses on the table showed an important idea within the film with drinking alcohol as the male character was an alcoholic like Jasmine’s father was in One Day. The drink was wine, giving the idea the male was feminine again as this is stereotypically a more feminine drink. To improve this now, I would have had the wine bottle less full to give the impression that they had been drinking more than shown. I would also experiment with putting a small candle on the table to increase the setting.

The nine key frames were also important in showing how the film would be shot, I had to think carefully of how I would shoot this and tried to keep swapping the camera round to be behind each character to give equal power. I experimented a lot with taking photographs through the wine glasses which I liked a lot; this could give the audience many other messages.

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Final draft of Textual analysis

Compare and contrast the representation of gender in P.S. I love you and One Day.

Within this essay, I will be talking about the representation of gender within P.S. I Love You and One Day. It is questioned whether representing gender in these ways is sexist or not, some people feel that it is unfair to represent gender in these ways as it can be very untrue and biased. Whereas other people argue that people enjoy seeing things in this way and can relate to aspects. It is strongly argued that the way gender is represented within films affects the real life, with males being representing in this way, 

this has changed a lot in real life and males are very different now to how they used to be.

I will mostly be using the sound within these two films to back up what I am going to say. The representation within these two films is a contrast to one another, in P.S. I Love You Holly is shown having a change in behaviour throughout the film and in One Day, Emma is shown being a powerful and independent woman throughout. One Day challenges the stereotypes of females as they are usually shown as the weak, useless sex but as the film is not Hollywood it challenges this. Whereas P.S. I Love You conforms to the stereotypes of a woman going on a journey to find herself.

At the beginning of P.S. I Love You, we see the idea of women being represented as a predictable stereotype of a woman with having an argument with her partner without explaining the reason and also having a lot of shoes. Scene one introduces the characters, Holly and Gerry, they are arguing but Gerry doesn’t know what he has done to make her annoyed with him. She is shown as being argumentative through the sound, because even though they are walking down the street there is little background noise. This has been done to increase the tension of their argument and the only sounds we hear is Gerry’s dialogue. This also directs the audience to listen to what Gerry has to say and the audience realise that Gerry’s dialogue is important. Holly is being shown as a powerful character during this scene, she is shown having power of the situation and over Gerry, during their argument Gerry leaves their apartment and then asks to return a few minutes later. Because of the long take once Gerry has left, we see that Holly didn’t really want him to leave and that she is feeling sad without him. This has been done because the target audience for P.S. I Love You is females and they want to be portrayed as quite powerful at the beginning of a film to draw them in.

A comparison with this is in One Day in the second scene when again we have an introduction to the characters. However, in this scene Emma and Dexter have just properly met after their graduation, they then go back to her apartment. Differently from P.S. I love you, Emma is portrayed as quite a timid character who doesn’t want to get anything wrong. She wants to have a good time with Dexter and even when she leaves the room is get ready, she puts some music on to create an atmosphere. The music represents Emma as it is different and Dexter seems a little taken back at first. This has been done because without Emma and Dexter together, there is little other sound so this music sets the mood whilst she is gone. When Emma is lying in bed with Dexter, we now have soft music playing which creates a mood of intense and friendship, this lets the audience understand that Emma and Dexter are going to have a good and strong friendship. During this scene, Emma talks to herself mentioning that she has never been that good at this sort of thing which shows us that she wants a relationship which is a very feminine aspect and Dexter is seen as not caring for her much at the beginning but we see that once he can’t have her, he wants her which is seen as very masculine.

Once Gerry has passed away in P.S. I love you, we start to see how Holly is now being represented as a weak female without the guidance of a male around, she is being seen as very dependent on Gerry. This is scene five and we see that she is really missing him here and is depressed without her soul mate Gerry, she is staying in on her own and is rejecting any help from her friends and family. The sound is really important in showing Holly’s downfall in this scene as there is a lot more sound than in the previous scenes. There is music which is creating an atmosphere to how Holly is feeling without Gerry, this represents women as weak as it is showing Holly’s struggle without him around. We hear the telephone voicemails as a voice over, which lets the audience know that people are trying to help Holly through this difficult time but that she is rejecting this help. This represents women as trying to be independent but actually appearing quite fragile. We also hear the TV in the background, this is to create an atmosphere of a busy environment and Holly not being able to focus on one thing. We also hear memories of Holly and Gerry’s conversation, which gives the audience the impression that Holly cannot let go of her memories of Gerry and is mourning over him. She still sees him around and talks to him about her problems. Gerry plays the guitar softly at one point, which relaxes and comforts Holly as she feels like he is around with her. All of this sound portrays females as weak and incompetent without males. It also represents the male character as romantic, which is a characteristic that is not usually associated with males.

This scene can be linked to scene eight in One Day, in this scene we again have a lot more sound and background noise than before. Emma has gone out with another male in this scene and Dexter keeps ringing her and is shown as really needing and relying on her although she cannot help him. Females are being represented as independent and not needing males around to survive. This is opposite to P.S. I love you, as now Dexter needs Emma and is being shown as incompetent without her. This shows a role reversal as Emma is the character in power here and males are being represented as the weaker sex. This was done because it shows the audience that she is as strong and powerful as a male which challenges the stereotypes of a female.

In scene twenty-seven in P.S. I love you, the audience again see the change in Holly’s behaviour as she is now being shown as an independent female again as she is doing things on her own. She is shown moving on with her life and going back to Ireland to take her Mother there for one final visit. The audience hear a voice-over of Holly’s final message to Gerry throughout the clips. Females are being represented more positively and having more power and independence at this stage.

This can be linked to scene 19 in One Day, as this is too a closing scene to the film. At this stage in the film, Emma has passed away. Dexter is talking to his daughter at the same place that he and Emma visited a few years back, he misses Emma a lot but is trying to stay strong and powerful although the audience can see that this is not easy for him. His daughter is being shown as a young female who has strong views so this too makes women still seem powerful at the end of the film. There is similarities seen between Emma and his daughter which shows that Dexter feels stronger and happier once his daughter is around him which shows his reliance on a female being around.

Both of the two films are targeted at women as they have the typical story lines that statistics show that women enjoy, this could affect the way that gender is being represented. It could make women seem powerful and men seen as powerless and crying as this is what they may think that women want to see. It shows the journey of a woman as this is what attracts women as they can relate to the journey that they have experienced in their lives too.

The two films show things slightly differently because of the fact that P.S. I Love You is a big-budget Hollywood film and One Day is the opposite. Hollywood films have certain messages that are always put across such as that women are weak, women need men’s love and a family and men are pathetic. P.S. I Love You, does put these messages across which affects the representation of gender within the film. As One Day is not a Hollywood film, these messages are not portrayed and the women are shown being the more powerful ones and the male character is shown as weak and pathetic and the woman is shown being in charge. In this film, the male character is shown as being incompetent when the female dies and he only seems stronger once he has his daughter back who reminds him of the female.

These two films condone women in a variety of ways, from powerful to weak. One Day represents women as powerful throughout the whole film as Emma is always shown having power even when she is timid. P.S. I love you shows a journey within a woman, she changes from weak and depressed to powerful and moving on with her life, this emphasises the idea of women travelling in their journey that they have to make.        

Script annotated with shot types

1. Mid shot of both characters - I am using this shot because it establishes the characters and introduces them to the audience. 

2. Over the shoulder shot seeing Jasmine's glass - I am using this shot because it shows Jasmine's femininity with how she is holding the glass and it brings in the idea of the drinking alcohol like in the previous One Day. 

3. Medium close up of Jasmine - I am using this shot as this is when Jasmine has just chose what she would like to eat and her facial expressions show a lot about her character.  

Location Report

My script is set in a restaurant, so I took these location photos in a Harvester. I wish to dress my scene up to look like this setting.

I like the look of this restaurant, I wish to copy the small wooden table idea with the two chairs either side and I think it looks good with the cutlery on the table so I think that I will use this on my table. I want to make sure that I have a lot of different angles and shots when taking the photos of the actors sitting at the table for me as I have done in these location photos, as it looks effective seeing the setting from different angles.
I am not sure on the fact that this table has the light shining from behind it as this is too bright for my setting and I wanted the lighting quite low. I also think that I won't include the menu on the table and I don't want any salt, vinegar, sauces etc on the table as this makes the restaurant not look very posh and this was the idea that I was going for.

I chose this location for the shots of the restaurant.